gonna go on the opposite spectrum today and post a poem i wrote for my first love a long time ago when i was still new to writing hope you all enjoy and feel free to follow and stay tuned for more :)
I see the truth in those eyes
You do not love me but that is a lie
For I see into your heart
The love hidden within the dark
All you need to do is to believe
Just tell me so that you you may be relieved
I will never leave your side
You must not believe you have lied
If you wish to see, My heart will carry you across the sea
Please just come to me, I will truly set you free
thank you everyone for your support so far :)
lovely
ReplyDelete:D nice
ReplyDeletenice poem =D
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also, your post reminded me of the song, behind blue eyes =P
theres so much meaning in that poem
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ReplyDeletevery nice poem
ReplyDeleteyour peom is nice <3
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Thanks for the kind comments on my blog :)
ReplyDeleteBehind blue eyes.. =]
ReplyDeleteNice man..I feel like i can relate to this one the most out of all the ones I read
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